[fic] Futuristic Orange: Gravity Visor

Wow, it's already the seventh? Amazing. I remember when I was freaking out over the M3, and Michan/Shamuon's new CD coming out... as if it were yesterday.

Anyway, I'm starting to write the "first draft" of my writing homework. It's supposed to be a short story, with a simple plot. However... I don't write "simple" things. I've condensed the plot as much as I could, so each section should take about a page and a half.
I'll be posting the section as I write them, each with an individual post. I've planned six sections total, with a possible ?? section. I'm almost positive I can write it all today. It's so simple, though it took almost ten pages of notes to write out (more like nine).

Anyway, no little "setup" thingy, 'cause I'm too lazy, and this is just a draft |D
As it being a draft, I haven't gone over spelling, or sentence structure, etc.

( section one of FO: Gravity Visor )

[fic] futuristic orange: gravity visor PART TWO

Yes, yes. This is "section two [Jones] / 'Jenny' "
Forgot to post this hours ago. Almost done part three.
Remember, it's not edited.

( this is the second part )