a tale over 6000 words long, already.
Sep. 6th, 2009 05:04 amI would very much like to present my six hour copy of The Sun Shines Down on Our Future, a spur of the moment story which is in the exact crossroad of being either actually completed or horribly left alone and shelved, like most things I start and become 'passionate' about. Unfortunately, that passion looses its luster when I get bored of the early chapters. I've learned from this, that I simply cannot stand writing a story with a slow start. This story, does not have a slow start<3
At least, in my opinion, it doens't.
summery? I'm not very good at summeries... but here's one anyway =]
Kusui Hayase has no memories between and including the ages 12 to 14. She first woke up in a jail-like school completely alienated and lonely... but this isn't what this particular story is about. This one is about a year later. Kusui has left the jail school and moved to a small fishing and docking town called Plato on the Pacific coast of Vancouver Island, Canada. Her life seems fixed and perfect, except for the chunk of three missing years of her life, which troubles her daily. The day comes when she starts recieving threatening text messages on her cell phone, threatening both her and her friends. This frustrates her, and on the third day, when he wants to finally meet her, she goes. Little does she know, by meeting this man, her past, horrors and all, will be revealed to her and our audience. Please follow her tales as she heroicly, and stupidly, bashes through them.
( chapter one - words 6,713 )
Please read and review<3
.. just comment saying something D:
I'm so tired of writing this, I'm going to bed NOW.
;w;
At least, in my opinion, it doens't.
summery? I'm not very good at summeries... but here's one anyway =]
Kusui Hayase has no memories between and including the ages 12 to 14. She first woke up in a jail-like school completely alienated and lonely... but this isn't what this particular story is about. This one is about a year later. Kusui has left the jail school and moved to a small fishing and docking town called Plato on the Pacific coast of Vancouver Island, Canada. Her life seems fixed and perfect, except for the chunk of three missing years of her life, which troubles her daily. The day comes when she starts recieving threatening text messages on her cell phone, threatening both her and her friends. This frustrates her, and on the third day, when he wants to finally meet her, she goes. Little does she know, by meeting this man, her past, horrors and all, will be revealed to her and our audience. Please follow her tales as she heroicly, and stupidly, bashes through them.
( chapter one - words 6,713 )
.. just comment saying something D:
I'm so tired of writing this, I'm going to bed NOW.
;w;